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~What
a Girl Wants~
by Liz Maverick
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Heroines:
varied |
Work stinks. Literally. Or at least it does for Haley Jane
Smith, who is surrounded by some very unhygienic coworkers. She
didn't even notice the funky odor wafting over from the adjacent
cubicle, where fellow copywriter Fred Leary had died unnoticed--until Haley made a fateful visit to his side of the
dividing wall.
And
things can only go downhill from there, as a shocked Haley Jane
bumbles her way from one bad decision to the next: feeling up
the investigating police officer; asking for a raise but getting
fired; and asking for support from her Girlie Brunch bunch, which
lands her an appointment with an unusual new age guidance guru, as
well as the starring role in her best friend's thesis on human
sexuality. If only Haley Jane's well-meaning friends could
actually make good on their intentions to coach her through
her man hunt and job search, maybe she
could wind up with both the hunky cop and the career of her
dreams!
Then
again, knowing those girls, maybe not.
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What worked for me: |
There was plenty of humor in this story, along with some terrific (and
sometimes hot) twists in the plot. I'm not sure if the author has
plans to do so, but the door was left open to revisit this fun group of
gals at a later date.
Size-wise the girls were varied. The main character, petite Haley Jane,
didn't have size issues per se, but she did entertain fantasies of
being a stacked, blonde, sharp shooting Amazonian member of Mensa.
Perhaps it had to do with the
Bavarian bar maid's outfit she wore in one scene, but Haley Jane
took on a decided Sandra Bullock-like appearance in my imagination.
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What didn't work for me: |
There were a couple of scenes I could have lived without, and the writing
could have been more polished. Also I felt I didn't get
to know the characters as deeply as I could have.
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Overall: |
"What a Girl Wants" is a sassy and sometimes silly read.
Grab a café latte and start up that bubble bath!
Warning: there are some coarse words and
sexual scenarios in this book.
If you liked
"What a Girl Wants" you might also enjoy
"Love at Large",
"Coffee and Kung Fu", "Separation Anxiety",
"Inappropriate Men",
"Bet Me",
"Blushing Pink", "The Way It
Is",
"Last Chance Saloon", "Sisterhood Situation",
"Bridget Jones's Diary", or
"Good in Bed".
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